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Lovers intwined
Lying together
Long hair in one tangled mess
Feminine fingers interlaced
Lips on skin
Tongue on flesh
Mouths touching
Tasting each other
Soft playful bites
Knowing smiles
Filled with passion and craving
Nails running along backs
Clawing with moans of ecstacy
The scent of incense in the room
Sunset spilling onto the floor
Heads nuzzled close to necks
Warmth spread from one to the other
Safety
No other thought than each other's pleasure
The simple joy of being close
Flirtation is a subconscious act
Done while touching
Talking
Breathing
Heartbeats in rhythm with one another
Blood flowing a mirror image
Thoughts expressed with an absence of words
Minds fitting together in one seamless motion
Basking in the perfection of existing
Within another's soul
©2005-2009 ~transcendecadence
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Submitted: January 5, 2005
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Written after realizing what I missed about having a girlfriend...
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It's not often that one finds that. Consider yourself lucky to have ever experienced it.
not only the perfect name for the poem but beautifully detailed ...makes an artist want to put a pen to the paper and try to justify what youve written and still the closest work could never come close to this poems beauty
I can barely find words to write a comment.
Of course, the first one that comes to mind is: beautiful.
And unfortunately not much else.
But reading this caused me to think about a memory nearly exactly like this.
It was almost like reliving that one moment in all of it's beauty.
Thank you.
wow...i dont know wat to say beyond that. its so wonderfully descriptive. it really does make me feel like drawing, tho i know it wouldnt come close enough. this poem is amazing.

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